Showing posts with label Emily Wilson. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Emily Wilson. Show all posts

Wednesday, August 05, 2026

Odyssey/s


Christopher Nolan, dir. & writ.: The Odyssey (2026)
[Warning - numerous plot spoilers ahead]:

Is Homer's Odyssey really filmable? It's inspired innumerable genre paintings over the ages, so it could certainly be claimed to lend itself to fanciful reimaginings ...

John William Waterhouse: Circe Offering the Cup to Odysseus (1891)



Christopher Nolan: Samantha Morton as Circe (2026)





Arnold Böcklin: Odysseus und Kalypso (1883)



Christopher Nolan: Charlize Theron as Calypso (2026)





Herbert James Draper: Ulysses and the Sirens (1909)



Christopher Nolan: The Sirens (2026)





Pintoricchio: Penelope with the Suitors (c.1509)



Christopher Nolan: Anne Hathaway as Penelope (2026)


The contrast between paintings and movie stills makes it clear just how comparatively restrained and austere Christopher Nolan's new movie is. Is it faithful to the source material? Not particularly, no. You constantly notice, as you go along, little bits of rewriting or reemphasis: whole sections - such as Odysseus's sojourn with Nausicaä and the Phaeacians: the original context for the hero's retelling of his own adventures to date - gone missing.


Jean Veber: Ulysses and Nausicaa (1888)


But does that really matter? Homer's Odyssey is, after all, immensely long - far too full of incident for all of it to be embodied in a single film. What's more, in Christopher Nolan's twenty-first century version of the tale he's hardly likely to indulge us with a gross-out scene of Odysseus hanging all the poor put-upon maids in the palace after the massacre of Penelope's rapey suitors. No, Nolan's intention throughout is to interrogate and question the motives for violence in this society - and, by extension, our own.


Margaret Atwood: The Penelopiad (2015)




Homer: The Odyssey. Trans. Emily Wilson (2017)


I'd been planning to continue my piece on Christopher Nolan's Odyssey by contrasting it with some of the earlier screen versions of the poem - with side-references to my own attempt at a listing of the principal English versions of Homer - but then classical scholar Emily Wilson's rather caustic review of Nolan's movie came out.

I'm afraid that my first reaction took the form of a short satirical epigram (along the lines of John Byrom’s famous piece about the rivalry between eighteenth century musicians George Frideric Handel and Giovanni Bononcini):



Tweedledum and Tweedledee

Some say, compar’d to Bononcini
That Mynheer Handel’s but a Ninny
Others aver, that he to Handel
Is scarcely fit to hold a Candle
Strange all this Difference should be
‘Twixt Tweedle-dum and Tweedle-dee!


Christopher Nolan vs. Emily Wilson

Some say that unlike Emily
Nolan stuffed up his Odyssey
others say unlike Christopher
Wilson believes she is Homer
strange all this difference should be
'twixt cine-him and scribble-she

Robbie Collin: Emily Wilson on Nolan's Odyssey (30/7/26)





Victor Boyko: Christopher Nolan (15/7/2026)


That may not be an adequate response, however. Wilson makes a number of points which are hard to dispute: there isn't nearly as much sex as in the original, and the food doesn't look that appetising ... Whether that's enough to justify panning the film altogether is another question, one which I'll try to discuss in more detail below.

For the moment, though, I think I should declare an interest. I've been a Christopher Nolan fan virtually from the beginning, which is bound to prejudice me in his favour to some extent. Certainly I've been following his work with increasing awe from Memento (2000) onwards.

It's hard to think of a movie of his since then that I haven't admired, or at the very least- Interstellar, Tenet - found intriguing. He is, in my opinion, a genius: one of those very few talents born to transform the art of cinema rather than simply add new items to it.



Having said that, even Homer nods, and I have to say that I wasn't particularly impressed by Dunkirk's stagey theatrics. But his Batman trilogy! And the fascinating wheels within wheels of The Prestige! Not to mention his most recent triumph, where all his skills seem to come together almost miraculously, Oppenheimer!

So where does The Odyssey stand on that scale? It's probably too early to say. So far, however, the indications look pretty good:
On review aggregation website Rotten Tomatoes, 94% of 466 critics' reviews are positive, with an average rating of 8.7/10. The website's consensus reads: "Reinvigorating an ancient adventure with majestic sweep and sterling work by its colossal ensemble, Christopher Nolan's The Odyssey imbues myth with primal human feeling." It is Nolan's highest-rated film on the website.
I wanted to feel like that - wanted to be able to rate it as high on my own list as Inception, which astonished me continuously from beginning to end, and must surely rank as one of the greatest SF films of all time.

There's a melancholy, world-weary tone to The Odyssey. It seems to lack that visceral sense of adventure that inspired so many of his earlier films. Having said that, I'm curious - now - to see it again, perhaps this time on an IMAX screen, and find out how it strikes me the second time round.


Christopher Nolan: Tom Holland as Telemachus (2026)


However, it did succeed in moving me to tears: just once. Unsurprisingly, it was in the scene where Odysseus is reunited with his aged hunting dog Argus, and his son Telemachus, at that moment, understands who this white-bearded beggar actually is.

I have to say that Tom Holland was excellent in the role of Telemachus - not at all the usual sulky brat. He played it with dignity and grace. Lupita Nyong'o, too, achieved an unexpected triumph in her double cameo as Helen and her twin sister Clytemnestra.


Christopher Nolan: Lupita Nyong'o as Helen (2026)



The title chosen for Emily Wilson's review of Nolan's Odyssey, "An Uncomplicated Man", is presumably intended as an allusion to the first line of her own 2017 translation of the poem: "Tell me about a complicated man."

A good deal of ink has been spilled on the deliberately provocative modernity of this choice of words on her part, a distinct contrast to Robert Fagles' "man of twists and turns", Richmond Lattimore's "man of many ways", or even Alexander Pope's "man for wisdom's various arts renowned". She is, in other words, no stranger to controversy. This piece is no exception:
Nolan’s Odyssey lacks many of the elements that make the poem great. It has nothing convincing to say about time, memory, history, war, or about the relationship between one warrior’s glorious return and the lives of his family, adversaries, comrades, friends and neighbours. It lacks psychological, emotional, political and ethical depth. Its narrative structure is gimmicky. The writing is abysmal. None of the characters has convincing motivation for their actions or words. There are no sex scenes, and all the food looks horrible.
Not to mention the fact that the dog dies, but not before his "adorableness as a puppy is predictably amped up to suit our animal-loving times." Not even the cuteness of a puppy is exempt from the wrath of this particular reviewer, it would appear ...

I'm afraid that she rather lost me with her next complaint about the movie, however:

The most troubling ethical problem with Nolan’s Odyssey concerns the decision to film part of the movie in the occupied territory of Western Sahara, thus normalising the ongoing violence against the indigenous Sahrawi people. It is particularly galling that Nolan used this land simply as a visually striking backdrop for a film that centres, aggrandises and redeems the hero of a territorial war on account of his belated and partial acknowledgment of his own guilt.
This piece of moral one-upmanship sounds quite damning at first - until you begin to break it down. The "most troubling ethical problem" with the film is that it concerns war crimes, and yet was (partially) filmed in a debatable land rife with war crimes? Pardon me, but are there any parts of the globe that aren't past (or present) sites of crimes against humanity?

Emily Wilson is (according to her Wikipedia page) a professor of classical studies at the University of Pennsylvania, which is a "private Ivy League research university in Philadelphia." Philadelphia, originally named "Shackamaxon", was originally inhabited by the Lenape, also known as the Delaware Indians, who were "pushed out of the region during the 18th century as the original Thirteen Colonies expanded". I like that term "pushed out" - it sounds so much better than "ethnically cleansed" ...



Does she mention this disturbing history at the opening of each of her publications? I doubt it. And yet it's now become the custom in more recently colonised countries, such as Australia and New Zealand, to acknowledge the traditional owners of the land before beginning any public proceedings. Perhaps she and her institution should follow suit.

In any case, is this really the "most troubling ethical problem with Nolan’s Odyssey"? Surely there are a lot of other moral and economic concerns associated with any big Hollywood production which should worry us before this particular detail about one of the locations chosen for the movie?

Isn't the ideological hegemony exerted by the American film industry - and by American capitalism in general - of rather more significance than this absurdly strained piece of right-on-ism about the Western Sahara? The obscene gap between overpaid actors and underpaid contractors in our culture, for instance?

Once you start down these rabbitholes of grievance there's no end to them. It you want to blame Christopher Nolan for 'ignoring' the terrible ongoing human rights abuses taking place in the Western Sahara, why not hold him personally responsible for all the other innumerable injustices in the structure of our society? Or yourself, for that matter.
Despite all this, the release of The Odyssey is still an event to celebrate. In what we are told is the streaming era, this epic is bringing audiences back to cinemas. In what we are told is a time of declining literacy and the ‘death of the humanities’, translations of The Odyssey, including mine, are flying off the shelves. Some of those who buy the book or show up in cinemas to watch Tom Holland may go on to study ancient Greek. Perhaps the film will persuade a few college administrators not to cut their literature, language and history departments. Nolan, who studied English at University College London – where students still study The Odyssey as a first year ‘foundational text’ – is doing his best to get the general public reading again, and I am grateful.
"In what we are told is the streaming era" ... I'm a decade or so older than Emily Wilson (presently in her mid-50s: a year younger than Christopher Nolan), but I hope that even I don't sound as much of an old fogey as that. I've even managed to stop calling films "flickers" and e-vehicles "horseless carriages". This last paragraph - especially that coy line about how "translations ... including mine, are flying off the shelves" - reads like a deliberate parody of what elderly academics are supposed to sound like. Its closest cousin must surely be Jim Dixon's tortuously insincere "Merrie England" speech in Kingsley Amis's Lucky Jim - written in the mid-1950s, at the height of the "Angry Young Man" era:
... I say to you that something can be done by each one of us here tonight. Each of us can resolve to do something, every day, to resist the application of manufactured standards, to protest against ugly articles of furniture and table-ware, to speak out against sham architecture, to resist the importation into more and more public places of loudspeakers relaying the Light Programme, to say one word against the Yellow Press, against the best-seller, against the theatre-organ, to say one word for the instinctive culture of the integrated village-type community. In that way we shall be saying a word, however small in its individual effect, for our native tradition, for our common heritage, in short, for what we once had and may, some day, have again – Merrie England.

Kingsley Amis: Lucky Jim (1954)





Anne Dacier: L’Odyssée d’Homere (1716)


It's interesting how Emily Wilson's twin versions of the Odyssey and Iliad have been so insistently marketed as the first complete translations by a woman - the implication being that they're therefore bound to provide us with many fresh insights obscured through the ages by patriarchal misogyny.

I have no particular quarrel with that line of reasoning. It's certainly been very effective in selling these two new versions in an already overstocked market. But it's important to note the proviso: the first complete translations into English verse by a woman.

That mightn't seem to make much difference to monoglot English speakers, but it's perhaps worth pausing here to celebrate the earlier achievements of (for example) the inspired and audacious Anne Le Fèvre, more commonly known as Mme Anne Dacier:


Marie Victoire Jaquotot: Madame Dacier (1651-1720)
In 1711, her prose translation of the Iliad appeared, which earned her the esteem in which she is held in French literature. It was followed in 1716 by a similar translation of the Odyssey. Alexander Pope found these two works very useful for his own translations (Iliad (1715-1720) and Odyssey (1725–1726)). Dacier in turn published, in her second edition of the Iliad, remarks on Pope's translation of the same, which gained her some fame in England as well.

Anne Dacier: 'L'Iliade d’Homere (1711)


Dacier, like Wilson, was a considerable classical scholar and (again like Wilson) by no means averse to controversy:
In 1714, [Antoine] La Motte, who could not read Greek, published a poetical version of the Iliad, abridged and altered to suit his own taste, together with a Discours sur Homère ("Discourse on Homer"), stating the reasons why Homer failed to satisfy his critical taste. Dacier replied in the same year in her work, Des causes de la corruption du goût ("Of the Causes of the Corruption of Taste"). In defending Homer, Dacier "developed her own philosophical aesthetics. She insists on the centrality of taste as an indicator of the level of civilization, both moral and artistic, within a particular culture."
In the eyes of some male pundits, however, this ability to read Homer in the original was a handicap rather than an advantage:
Enlightenment philosopher Immanuel Kant, in his Observations on the Feeling of the Beautiful and Sublime, critiqued learned women of the time, including Mme. Dacier stating: "A Woman who has a head full of Greek, like Mme. Dacier, or who conducts disputations about mechanics, like the Marquise du Châtelet might as well also wear a beard; for that might perhaps better express the mien of depth for which they strive."

Politics & Prose: Emily Wilson & the Iliad (2024)





New Yorker: Joyce Carol Oates (2020)


The one thing that Christopher Nolan seems to understand most intimately - since it's at the heart of so many of his films - is the danger of hubris. You'd think Emily Wilson might fear it too. But she does persist, perversely, in crossing powerful goddesses.

Her review of The Odyssey, for instance, appears to have offended those three most terrifying words in the English language, Joyce Carol Oates, who complains that Wilson's "tone of dismissal & haughty superiority strike a sour note":
rather than disagreeing with interpretations of Homer in a collegial manner, this person, who has benefited enormously from Nolan’s film, speaks in the crude language of MAGA folks attacking someone with ideas that differ from hers. within the world of translators this seems all the more surprising since all translations are, presumably, subjective & not equivalent to the original text. one would expect a translator, of all people, beholden to a text, in service to a text, to be just a wee bit more thoughtful & respectful of others who are acting in good faith just as (she would claim) she is.
It might be a bit of a stretch to include Wilson in the ranks of "MAGA folks" simply on the strength of this one review, but I can see what Oates means. She goes on to say that she sees:
no reason why Nolan, or anyone else, should not re-imagine/re-envision a classical hero through the prism of his own invention. Homer’s “noble” Odysseus does not really seem so noble to contemporary readers who are likely to think of, for instance, Lt. William Calley in such lines: “From Ilion I was borne by a wind toward the Kikones –/ To Ismaros. There I laid waste the city and killed the men./ After dragging their wives from the city – with a great deal of booty as well –/ We divided it up …” (Book 9, Mendelsohn translation) No remorse here, just swaggering male braggadocio typical of “noble Odysseus” – “Odysseus, that cunning man”; but still, in Nolan’s vision, even such a man is capable of conscience & remorse eventually. in the 1997 adaptation it is pride that Odysseus must overcome; in Nolan’s version, it is conscience ...

Andrei Konchalovsky, dir.: The Odyssey (TV mini-series, 1997)


Oates concludes by saying:
I do not think that Nolan’s film will be considered a great classic but really, it seems that whatever Nolan did, it would disappoint hordes of people. most moviemakers/creators just try the best they can – it seems odd that this director has drawn such angry criticism.
She goes on to note that such criticism
is chilling, dampening for any creative artist. to attack a creative artist as if he were a criminal, had done something to harm, hurt, kill – this is alarming. if you hate a movie, fine – no need to recommend it. no one expects every work of art to be a classic, perfect … rage seems just weirdly inappropriate.

The New York Times: The Inscrutable Brilliance of Anne Carson (2013)


This is not the first time that Emily Wilson has wilfully courted the wrath of the White Goddess. She began her review of poetry diva Anne Carson's recent poetry collection Wrong Norma as follows:


Anne Carson: Wrong Norma (2024)
Write about trauma. Write about loneliness. Write about grief. Write about nature. Write about the body. Invoke universals. Make it mythic. Tell it slant. Do not use rhyme. Do not use meter. Use short lines. Leave a lot of space on the page. Juxtapose your words with quivery line drawings in ink or paint or collage.

If you want to produce poetry that a large subset of American teenagers and twentysomethings will adore with a passion verging on religious devotion, these simple rules provide your best hope.
By comparison with this little effort, Wilson's strictures on Nolan's Odyssey begin to sound like a love-letter. She does, after all, admit a certain gratitude to him for increasing the sales of her own version of the poem.

It would be impertinent of me to question Wilson's views on Ancient Greek, though she does seem to permit herself a certain telescoping of eras in pointing out just what Nolan has got wrong in his version of Homer - himself many centuries distant from the quasi-historical events he recounted. I would say, though, that the following passage shows an ignorance of contemporary poetry on a far grander scale than any of the solecisms she detects in Nolan's movie:


National Arts Centre: Margaret Atwood (2012)
Of the three prominent writers who have triumphantly followed this track [i.e. the "simple rules" listed in her first paragraph], the most senior, born 1939, is Margaret Atwood, who has published 18 books of melancholic, reflective poetry, at least one including her own, quirky art, that often juxtapose contemporary experiences with allusions to ancient and medieval fables and myths. The youngest, born 1992, is Rupi Kaur, whose work has an enormous following, especially among young people on social media. Many readers with no interest in any other poetry — including one of my own daughters — have found a kind of spiritual salvation in Kaur’s visceral, poetic evocations of the struggles of young womanhood.

Baljit Singh: Rupi Kaur (2024)


Margaret Atwood is a famous novelist. Her poetry, while certainly highly regarded, is hardly in the mainstream of contemporary verse. As for bestselling "insta-poet" Rupi Kaur, comparing her clichéd banalities to the work of the multi-award-winning Carson can only be seen as a deliberate insult. Juxtaposing the two poets is about as intelligent as equating Keith Haring with Johannes Vermeer.

But that, of course, is Wilson's rather less than subtle point.
Be Canadian. Be zany. Be moody. Be relatable. Write about your mother. Write about desire. Write about trauma. Write about loneliness. Write about grief. Write about nature. Write about the body. Invoke universals. Make it mythic.
Atwood, Kaur, and Carson are all indubitably Canadian. Does that make them all alike as poets? Not entirely, Wilson concedes. "What distinguishes Carson from her more pop-inclined compatriots is her clear interest in disguise, performance, and experimentation with genre."
Like many of us, Carson uses writing to find out what she thinks; but the means of production do not always need to be preserved in the finished product. You can throw the ladder away after you make the climb.
"Like many of us" ... a horrible truth begins to dawn at this point. The author of a competent translation of Homer in rather jog-trot pentameters actually considers herself a poet on the same level as the tirelessly innovative Carson. She goes on:
I have been told that Carson, preparing to give a talk onstage, has been spotted in the green room, speaking to herself and saying over and over, ‘I am Anne Carson. I am Anne Carson' ... The performance of her own personal identity, on the page as well as onstage, is a site of struggle and artistry.

Camille Paglia: Vamps and Tramps (1994)


This is just silly - and offensive as well. It puts me a mind a little of Camille Paglia's painfully embarrassing acccount of her attempts as a young grad student to impress Susan Sontag, whom she'd managed to entrap into taking a car journey with her. Sontag, understandably, found it difficult to understand why her interlocutor seemed to want to be her, to upstage her, and to kill her, all at the same time.

The penny drops at last. These frantic cries for attention are Emily Wilson's version of the anxiety of influence. Anne Carson's sin lies in being a classicist and a widely acclaimed poet, whereas Wilson is regarded as (at best) a competent versifier. The worst thing of all is the fact that Carson doesn't appear to have noticed this foolish attack on her.

When asked later about Paglia's vitriolic denunciations of her, Sontag, too, is reported to have said: "Who's Camille Paglia?"


Danielle Binks: Christopher Nolan's The Odyssey (17/7/2026)


But Christopher Nolan's sin is even more grievous. Remember that quote near the top of my page? "I would be ashamed to have written any part of this script." Despite offering, early on, some tepid praise of her version, which he claimed had influenced his script, he didn't ask her to help. She might have been ashamed to have written it in its present form, but you can be sure that she had a kick-ass version in her head, all ready to go at the press of a button (so does Elon Musk, we're told: his is gonna be untold better than Nolan's, it'll be made it with AI, and he'll be getting Mel Gibson to direct it ...)

Her Odyssey was highly praised, but it came out nearly ten years ago now and the bloom has started to fade. So, instead of writing a Hollywood blockbuster, why not translate it again, only this time much better? There's a new article out about that now, too: "Why Emily Wilson Is Translating The Odyssey — Again":
I wouldn’t have done this and then be doing it all over again if I didn’t think the whole thing is awesome.
Awesome indeed. Once was enough for Alexander Pope, and William Cowper - even for T. E. Lawrence ... but "with her second version, Wilson intends to honor the poetic traditions of the English language". This Harper's Bazaar article, too (alas) begins with that familiar exaggeration:
Wilson first completed her version of Homer’s epic poem in 2017, becoming the first woman ever to publish a translation of the story.
Except for Anne Dacier's and Rosa Calzecchi Onesti's complete translations of both the Iliad and the Odyssey, that is - not to mention Caroline Alexander's earlier Iliad.


Caroline Alexander: The Iliad (2015)





Uberto Pasolini, dir.: The Return (2024)


But then, Christopher Nolan has his predecessors, too - not that he's ever sought to conceal the fact. Among the various recent cinematic versions of the Odyssey, I'd like to single out Uberto Pasolini's The Return: a detailed version of the final twelve books of the epic. It's important to remember that no less than half of Homer's poem is devoted to Odysseus' return to Ithaca, so treating the subject in such depth was his idea, not Pasolini's.

My first thought on seeing this film was that it was meant as a deliberate echo of such classic Pier Paolo Pasolini movies as Il fiore delle Mille e una notte (1974), part of his trilogy of life (The Decameron, The Canterbury Tales, and the Arabian Nights).

Like them, it seems to move in a world of pre-existing landscapes rather than carefully modelled sets. The characters, too, underact as much as possible: preferring to let the gradually unfolding story speak for itself.

It came as a bit of surprise to me to discover that Uberto Pasolini is no relation of Pier Paolo. Instead, he's the nephew of Luchino Visconti, director of The Leopard (1963) and Death in Venice (1971). But that doesn't really seem to offer us much of a clue to his intentions - and neither does the fact that his past credits include producing quintessential British movie The Full Monty (1997) and directing the little gem Still Life:


imdb: Uberto Pasolini (1957- )


There's a certain intimacy about many of the scenes in The Return which might recall Still Life, in fact. But perhaps it's the writing team we should really be concerning ourselves with.

They include veteran screenwriter John Collee, a sure hand at a big screen epic - his credits include Master and Commander (2003) (directed by Peter Weir); the Charles Darwin bio-pic Creation (2009); Hotel Mumbai (2018); and Kate Winslet's Lee (2023).


Edward Bond (1934- 2024)


But of course the crucial figure there is legendary British playwright Edward Bond. His 50-odd plays include such masterpieces as Lear (1971), a rewritten, more class-conscious version of Shakespeare's King Lear; and Narrow Road to the Deep North (1968), set in the haiku poet Bashō's Japan, and notorious at the time as "The One With Five Dead Babies and a Disembowelling".

Pasolini (and Bond)'s is a brutal vision of the rottenness of the state of Ithaka in the absence of its king, and his version of the death of the suitors seems to go on forever. Otherwise, the two directors, Nolan and Pasolini, present suprisingly similar visions of Odysseus's Mycenaean hill-fort - and the impossible dilemma of their respective resplendent Penelopes, Juliette Binoche and Anne Hathaway.




Derek Walcott: The Odyssey: A Stage Version (1993)

"The future happens. No matter how much we scream
― Derek Walcott, The Odyssey


Which leaves me, for my final dramatised Odyssey, with Nobel-Prize-winning poet Derek Walcott's epic play, originally commissioned by the Royal Shakespeare Company, but recently revived for a new production in Houston, Texas:


Melissa Taylor: Shawn Hamilton as Blind Billy Blue (2023)


As local theatre critic Chris Vogner describes it:
Alley Theatre artistic director Rob Melrose was mesmerized when he saw Derek Walcott’s Odyssey in London back in 1993. Walcott had taken Homer’s epic poem about love and longing for home and given it a jolt and a lilt from his native Saint Lucia, spicing the work with Caribbean flavor. It was a follow-up of sorts to Walcott’s Omeros, a postcolonial meditation that borrowed characters and themes from Homer’s Iliad. But where Omeros was a sort of homage to Homer, this Odyssey was the real deal.
Rob Melrose goes on to say:
“It's one of my favorite stories of all time,” he said. “I have a Greek scholar friend who said, ‘There are two kinds of people in the world. There are Iliad people and there are Odyssey people. The Iliad is about war and fighting and strife, and The Odyssey is about adventure and romance and love. I'm definitely an Odyssey person. It's so wondrous, the way it's about a father and a son and a husband and a wife, and all the creatures and goddesses he comes across in his journeys.”

Derek Walcott: The poet laid bare (1992)


That seems to me a very pertinent remark. Having recently read Walcott's play for the first time, and fresh from my viewings of both Uberto Pasolini's and Christopher Nolan's films, I'd have to admit that I, too, am an Odyssey person.

I understand the arguments in favour of the Iliad. Structurally, it makes more sense as a story, and its range of emotions and depth of understanding of human nature are probably even greater than those supplied by the Odyssey. But the Odyssey offers hope where the Iliad has little or none. Against all odds, Odysseus does return, does defeat his enemies. He even succeeds in placating the gods he's offended for long enough to earn one more night in his tree-bound bed with his faithful wife.

It offers, in the end, a more ecumenical, more inclusive view of the world than the relentless tragic truths of the Iliad. And it's always been open to endless new interpretations and readings. Nolan, Pasolini, Walcott, and Wilson are all part of that story. Of course they all prefer their own recreations to those of their rivals: that's their privilege - but surely, for the rest of us, the more versions we have of it the better?

There may or may not have been a single poetic genius called Homer, and he/she/they may or may not have written both the Iliad and the Odyssey. The arguments on that subject have been going on now for more than two thousand years. What we do have is the poems themselves. So let's just be grateful for that, and cut it out with all this pointless infighting.


Christopher Nolan, dir.: The Odyssey (2026)





Friday, May 08, 2026

Neruda in English


Pablo Neruda (1904-1973)


In 1964 Neruda had come to read his poetry at a gathering in King's College, London, and I still carried in my mind the sensual sonority - as rich and evocative as Chopin's music - that he brought to his love poems, caressing and emphasizing their lush strain of natural imagery. Neruda, a communist, was so deeply involved in Chilean politics that the presidency was within his grasp, but he relinquished his ambitions in favour of his friend, Salvador Allende. It was in Cracow, in the bare lounge of the hotel on the last day of the [1973] Copernicus meeting that news reached us of the right-wing military coup against the legitimate Chilean government ... with CIA support. Allende had died in the defence of the Presidential Palace ... Two weeks later Pablo Neruda, a Spanish-speaking poet of genius like Lorca before him, died in the aftermath of right-wing revolution.
- Jane Hawking: Travelling to Infinity (1999 / 2007): 183

Jane Hawking (1944- )


I think this could be taken as the standard view of the poet Pablo Neruda among most left-wing readers (such as myself) over the decades since his death. Despite his revolutionary politics, an English Hispanicist like Jane Hawking clearly felt an immediate personal affinity with him, as well as with his works. Was it the intensity of his love poetry? The impassioned delivery?

After all - like his friend Lorca, the greatest Spanish poet of the twentieth century - Neruda, the most celebrated Latin American poet of his time, also ended tragically. His death was, at the time, tentatively attributed to natural causes - albeit exacerbated by despair at the violent military coup which had brought an end to Allende's presidency. Neruda was, furthermore, known to be suffering from prostate cancer.

However, there's now convincing evidence to suggest that his death, a few hours after being admitted to hospital and a couple of weeks after the coup, may actually have been caused by a mysterious injection in the stomach administered on arrival. His exhumation in 2013 failed to provide definitive proof either way, but the circumstances remain suspicious. I guess we'll never really know, but there are strong grounds for believing that, like Lorca, he was murdered.

He was, in other words, a victim of the turmoil of his times. Or was he?




Michael Radford, dir.: Il Postino [The Postman] (1994)


Neruda's most famous posthumous incarnation was undoubtedly in the 1994 Italian film Il Postino. This, however, was based - with significant revisions - on an earlier Chilean film by Antonio Skármeta, set in the village of Isla Negra during the last years of Neruda's life.

The humble Chilean postman of the original film - and novelisation - has become, in Il Postino, a lovelorn local on the tiny Italian island Neruda is portrayed as living on during his years of exile from his homeland between 1948 and 1952.

The political dimension of the original story has been deftly plastered over to create a fable of love and poetic inspiration calculated to offend nobody who might otherwise react adversely to Neruda's Stalinist beliefs.


Antonio Skármeta: Ardiente paciencia [Burning Patience] (1985)


To give you some idea of the differences between the blandly paternal Neruda of these movies and the real man, let's take a look at this poem from his 1958 book Estravagario:

Fábula de la sirena y los borrachos Todos estos señores estaban dentro cuando ella entró completamente desnuda ellos habían bebido y comenzaron a escupirla ella no entendía nada recién salía del río era una sirena que se había extraviado los insultos corrían sobre su carne lisa la inmundicia cubrió sus pechos de oro ella no sabía llorar por eso no lloraba no sabía vestirse por eso no se vestía la tatuaron con cigarrillos y con corchos quemados y reían hasta caer al suelo de la taberna ella no hablaba porque no sabía hablar sus ojos eran color de amor distante sus brazos construidos de topacios gemelos sus labios se cortaron en la luz del coral y de pronto salió por esa puerta apenas entró al río quedó limpia relució como una piedra blanca en la lluvia y sin mirar atrás nadó de nuevo nadó hacia nunca más hacia morir. - Pablo Neruda (1958)
All these men were there inside, when she entered, utterly naked. They had been drinking, and began to spit at her. Recently come from the river, she understood nothing. She was a mermaid who had lost her way. The taunts flowed over her glistening flesh. Obscenities drenched her golden breasts. A stranger to tears, she did not weep. A stranger to clothes, she did not dress. They pocked her with cigarette ends and with burnt corks, and rolled on the tavern floor with laughter. She did not speak, since speech was unknown to her. Her eyes were the colour of faraway love, her arms were matching topazes. Her lips moved soundlessly in coral light, and ultimately, she left by that door. scarcely had she entered the river than she was cleansed, gleaming once more like a white stone in the rain; and without a backward look, she swam once more, swam toward nothingness, swam to her dying.

- trans. Alastair Reid (1972)



I remember once submitting this fierce, rather disturbing poem for discussion in a little graduate study group we had going in Edinburgh in the 1980s. I was in the midst of writing a thesis on representations of Latin America in European culture at the time, and Neruda was one of the most powerful voices I'd so far encountered.

In James Thurber's immortal words: "It never occurred to me the other children would laugh. They laughed loudly and long." Or, rather, they didn't so much laugh as recoil in shock from what they saw as the blatant sexism of the poem.

So far as my friends were concerned, Neruda was simply revelling in this scene of some good ol' boys having a good ol' time with the innocent mermaid. They saw nothing of the emblematic significance of the rape of South America's paradisal ecology - the satire at the expense of local macho stereotypes ... all that was mere topdressing to them.

"It's a dirty story of a dirty man," as The Beatles put it in "Paperback Writer." Simple as that. I began to understand why irony and double meanings were so absent from the fiction and poetry of the time. The idea of saying one thing to mean another was clearly alien to them. I shut up about Neruda after that.

I still think it's a profound and remarkable poem. Edgy but ...


Pablo Neruda: Confieso que he vivido: Memorias (1974)


Mind you, maybe they were the smart ones and I was the gullible fool. When, in 1981, it was decided to name "Chile’s busiest international airport after him", this proposal was "met with outrage from human rights activists who argue that the honour is inappropriate for a man who admitted to rape in his own memoirs."
The current controversy springs from ... Neruda’s memoir [Confieso que he vivido: "I confess that I have lived"], in which he describes raping a maid in Ceylon, where he occupied a diplomatic post in 1929.
After the woman ignored his advances, Neruda says he took “a strong grip on her wrist” and led her to his bedroom. “The encounter was like that of a man and a statue. She kept her eyes wide open all the while, completely unresponsive,” he recalled. “She was right to despise me.”
Although the memoir was published more than 40 years ago, the passage has only become the subject of debate in recent years, said Vergara Sánchez.
“We have started to demystify Neruda now, because we have only recently begun to question rape culture.”
Isabel Allende, the author and women’s rights campaigner, argued that Neruda’s work still had value. “Like many young feminists in Chile I am disgusted by some aspects of Neruda’s life and personality,” she told the Guardian. “However, we cannot dismiss his writing.”
“Very few people – especially powerful or influential men – behave admirably. Unfortunately, Neruda was a flawed person, as we all are in one way or another, and Canto General is still a masterpiece,” she said.
- Charis McGowan: "Poet, hero, rapist" (The Guardian, 20/3/2018)



Roberto Ampuero: Il Caso Neruda [The Neruda Case] (2008 / 2012)


So, tender love poet - or self-confessed rapist? Both, it would appear.

Roberto Ampuero's fascinating detective novel Il Caso Neruda goes even deeper into the poet's turbulent emotional history. In particular, he examines Neruda's cruel abandoment of his first wife, Maruca, and their daughter Malva Marina Reyes (1934–1943), who was born with hydrocephalus.

Certainly he was a flawed person - but leaving his first wife in 1936 to take up with another woman, Argentine artist Delia del Carril, while less than admirable behaviour, is (as Isabel Allende points out) the kind of thing lurking in many people's backstories. It was the fact that Neruda made no effort to extract his ex-wife and daughter from wartorn Germany that really constitutes the indelible stain on his record.

It's far easier to admire writers who can be painted as moral paragons. They're pretty few and far between, unfortunately. The most interesting thing about Neruda, perhaps, is his lifelong struggle against such facile excuses in his intensely self-critical memoirs and poetry. Take, for example, the following poem from Residence on Earth, one of his most celebrated and multi-faceted collections:




Pablo Neruda: Residencia en la Tierra (3 vols, 1933-1947)

Walking Around
Sucede que me canso de ser hombre. Sucede que entro en las sastrerías y en los cines marchito, impenetrable, como un cisne de fieltro Navegando en un agua de origen y ceniza. El olor de las peluquerías me hace llorar a gritos. Sólo quiero un descanso de piedras o de lana, sólo quiero no ver establecimientos ni jardines, ni mercaderías, ni anteojos, ni ascensores. Sucede que me canso de mis pies y mis uñas y mi pelo y mi sombra. Sucede que me canso de ser hombre. Sin embargo sería delicioso asustar a un notario con un lirio cortado o dar muerte a una monja con un golpe de oreja. Sería bello ir por las calles con un cuchillo verde y dando gritos hasta morir de frío No quiero seguir siendo raíz en las tinieblas, vacilante, extendido, tiritando de sueño, hacia abajo, en las tapias mojadas de la tierra, absorbiendo y pensando, comiendo cada día. No quiero para mí tantas desgracias. No quiero continuar de raíz y de tumba, de subterráneo solo, de bodega con muertos ateridos, muriéndome de pena. Por eso el día lunes arde como el petróleo cuando me ve llegar con mi cara de cárcel, y aúlla en su transcurso como una rueda herida, y da pasos de sangre caliente hacia la noche. Y me empuja a ciertos rincones, a ciertas casas húmedas, a hospitales donde los huesos salen por la ventana, a ciertas zapaterías con olor a vinagre, a calles espantosas como grietas. Hay pájaros de color de azufre y horribles intestinos colgando de las puertas de las casas que odio, hay dentaduras olvidadas en una cafetera, hay espejos que debieran haber llorado de vergüenza y espanto, hay paraguas en todas partes, y venenos, y ombligos. Yo paseo con calma, con ojos, con zapatos, con furia, con olvido, paso, cruzo oficinas y tiendas de ortopedia, y patios donde hay ropas colgadas de un alambre: calzoncillos, toallas y camisas que lloran lentas lágrimas sucias. - Pablo Neruda (1933)
It so happens I am sick of being a man. And it happens that I walk into tailorshops and movie houses dried up, waterproof, like a swan made of felt steering my way in a water of wombs and ashes. The smell of barbershops makes me break into hoarse sobs. The only thing I want is to lie still like stones or wool. The only thing I want is to see no more stores, no gardens, no more goods, no spectacles, no elevators. It so happens that I am sick of my feet and my nails and my hair and my shadow. It so happens I am sick of being a man. Still it would be marvelous to terrify a law clerk with a cut lily, or kill a nun with a blow on the ear. It would be great to go through the streets with a green knife letting out yells until I died of the cold. I don't want to go on being a root in the dark, insecure, stretched out, shivering with sleep, going on down, into the moist guts of the earth, taking in and thinking, eating every day. I don't want so much misery. I don't want to go on as a root and a tomb, alone under the ground, a warehouse with corpses, half frozen, dying of grief. That's why Monday, when it sees me coming with my convict face, blazes up like gasoline, and it howls on its way like a wounded wheel, and leaves tracks full of warm blood leading toward the night. And it pushes me into certain corners, into some moist houses, into hospitals where the bones fly out the window, into shoeshops that smell like vinegar, and certain streets hideous as cracks in the skin. There are sulphur-colored birds, and hideous intestines hanging over the doors of houses that I hate, and there are false teeth forgotten in a coffeepot, there are mirrors that ought to have wept from shame and terror, there are umbrellas everywhere, and venoms, and umbilical cords. I stroll along serenely, with my eyes, my shoes, my rage, forgetting everything, I walk by, going through office buildings and orthopedic shops, and courtyards with washing hanging from the line: underwear, towels and shirts from which slow dirty tears are falling.

- trans. Robert Bly (1993)



The paradoxes, the complications, the contradictions of being human - that's what Neruda is best at expressing. Despite his reputation for declamatory, anthem-like poems - The Heights of Macchu Picchu, for instance - there's generally some self-deprecatory sting in the tail of his works.


Pablo Neruda: The Heights of Macchu Picchu (1972)


Is that an excuse for his behaviour? Not in the least. But it could have the effect of making his work more valuable for the rest of us. It's not that he offers a way of achieving absolution for our crimes, but he does demonstrate that a great sinner - a Dostoevsky, a Marquis de Sade - may have certain insights to offer which we might otherwise miss.

That would appear to be Isabel Allende's view, at any rate.

Here, for example, is Scottish poet Robin Robertson's version of one of Neruda's Elemental Odes, where he attempts to enter into and empathise with the wholly non-human:

Oda a un gran atún en el mercado En el mercado verde, bala del profundo océano, proyectil natatorio, te vi, muerto. Todo a tu alrededor eran lechugas, espuma de la tierra, zanahorias, racimos, pero de la verdad marina, de lo desconocido, de la insondable sombra, agua profunda, abismo, sólo tú sobrevivías alquitranado, barnizado, testigo de la profunda noche. Sólo tú, bala oscura del abismo, certera, destruida sólo en un punto, siempre renaciendo, anclando en la corriente sus aladas aletas, circulando en la velocidad, en el transcurso de la sombra marina como enlutada flecha, dardo del mar, intrépida aceituna. Muerto te vi, difunto rey de mi propio océano, ímpetu verde, abeto submarino, nuez de los maremotos, allí, despojo muerto, en el mercado era sin embargo tu forma lo único dirigido entre la confusa derrota de la naturaleza: entre la verdura frágil estabas solo como una nave, armado entre legumbres, con ala y proa negras y aceitadas, como si aún tú fueras la embarcación del viento, la única y pura máquina marina: intacta navegando las aguas de la muerte. - Pablo Neruda (1954)
Here, among the market vegetables, this torpedo from the ocean depths, a missile that swam, now lying in front of me dead. Surrounded by the earth's green froth — these lettuces, bunches of carrots — only you lived through the sea's truth, survived the unknown, the unfathomable darkness, the depths of the sea, the great abyss, le grand abîme, only you: varnished black-pitched witness to that deepest night. Only you: dark bullet barreled from the depths, carrying only your one wound, but resurgent, always renewed, locked into the current, fins fletched like wings in the torrent, in the coursing of the underwater dark, like a grieving arrow, sea-javelin, a nerveless oiled harpoon. Dead in front of me, catafalqued king of my own ocean; once sappy as a sprung fir in the green turmoil, once seed to sea-quake, tidal wave, now simply dead remains; in the whole market yours was the only shape left with purpose or direction in this jumbled ruin of nature; you are a solitary man of war among these frail vegetables, your flanks and prow black and slippery as if you were still a well-oiled ship of the wind, the only true machine of the sea: unflawed, undefiled, navigating now the waters of death.

- trans. Robin Robertson (2007)


Poetry Foundation: Robin Robertson (1955- )


One reason I've chosen Robin Robertson's translation rather than the more familiar version by Margaret Sayers Peden is because of the detailed "Translator's Note" he supplied for its original publication in Poetry:
The classics demand to be made new, to be dusted off and polished to reveal their currency. In the same way, in this Anglocentric literary world, we must attend to modern poetry in other languages and encourage new readers — not through slavish, mechanical transcriptions into English (which Lowell described as “taxidermy”), but through English versions that are true to the tone of the original and which are also viable as poems in their own right.
Well put - and very much the line I've been arguing throughout this series of posts. But to get down to the nitty-gritty:
I might as well be specific about how this operates, at least in my case. In the preparatory work for my version of Neruda's glorious “Oda a un gran atún en el mercado,” I studied the original, with a good Spanish dictionary, and produced a number of drafts, before turning to the valuable English translation by Margaret Sayers Peden. I found that we differed over interpretation, syntax, and delivery, which is interesting given the relative simplicity of the original. There is a telling moment halfway through when Neruda describes the living tuna as being “como enlutada flecha,/dardo del mar,/intrépida aceituna.” He is enjoying the chime of “aceituna” (an olive) and “atún” (tuna), but it seems unrewarding for the English to try and follow his Chilean wordplay; as Peden has it: “a mourning arrow,/dart of the sea,/olive, oily fish.” Equally, a few lines later, still describing the tuna, “ímpetu/verde, abeto/submarino” isn’t clarified by “green/assault, silver/submarine fir,” only complicated.
Poets have a tendency to recreate or at least recast the poems they're trying to transmit from one language to another. Translators have a different set of priorities and responsibilities. it's pointless to argue which approach is "better". In the end, it depends on what you're looking for: a crib, a standalone poem, or something in between. No translation can really be all of those things simultaneously. Robertson continues:
In rendering this Neruda ode into English I have taken minor liberties of addition and deletion and attempted to steer a middle ground between Lowell’s rangy, risk-taking rewritings and the traditional, strictly literal approach. Effective translation is not accurate transliteration; it is a matter of losses and gains, and it requires a certain boldness (some might say irreverence) in attempting to reach the feel of the original. Nothing can replace the reading of the poem in its true language, of course, but — in my view — a loose version by a writer attentive to, and familiar with, the dynamics of poetry is always better than a straight literal verse translation that defers too dutifully to all the words in the order in which they first appeared.
That would be my view, too - but I accept that that's not what a lot of readers expect of a "verse translation."
I should also say, in further defense, that the brief odic line that gives the poem such impressive length is adopted not just because I’m Scottish and we're being paid by the line, but because I’ve followed Neruda's original: its sinuous, vertical shape is surely the shape of Chile itself.
I can't really see it, but I do find that a lovely notion. Robertson is clearly a man after my own heart. I sensed that already after reading his poetry collection Grimoire:


Rpbin Robertson: Grimoire: New Scottish Folk Tales (2020)




Which brings us back to Neruda - and Il Postino - and that poem from his Cien sonetos de amor so central to the theme of the film: how to use poetic metaphors to woo a young woman.

It is, at least in appearance, a pretty straightforward piece of writing, so it may seem surprising that there are so many different versions of it available.

Here are a few of them:




Pablo Neruda: Cien sonetos de amor [100 Love Sonnets] (1959)


    Cien sonetos de amor: XXVII
    - Pablo Neruda (1959)

    Desnuda eres tan simple como una de tus manos,
    lisa, terrestre, mínima, redonda, transparente,
    tienes líneas de luna, caminos de manzana,
    desnuda eres delgada como el trigo desnudo.
    
    Desnuda eres azul como la noche en Cuba,
    tienes enredaderas y estrellas en el pelo,
    desnuda eres enorme y amarilla
    como el verano en una iglesia de oro.
    
    Desnuda eres pequeña como una de tus uñas,
    curva, sutil, rosada hasta que nace el día
    y te metes en el subterráneo del mundo
    
    como en un largo túnel de trajes y trabajos:
    tu claridad se apaga, se viste, se deshoja
    y otra vez vuelve a ser una mano desnuda.




    Pablo Neruda: 100 Love Sonnets. Trans. Stephen Tapscott (1986)


  1. Sonnet XXVII

  2. - trans. Stephen Tapscott (1986)

    Naked, you are simple as one of your hands,
    smooth, earthy, small, transparent, round;
    you have moon-lines, apple pathways:
    naked, you are slender as a naked grain of wheat.
    
    Naked, you are blue as a night in Cuba;
    You have vines and stars in your hair;
    naked, you are spacious and yellow
    as summer in a golden church.
    
    naked, you are tiny as one of your nails -
    curved, subtle, rosy, till the day is born
    and you withdraw to the underground world,
    
    as if down a long tunnel of clothing and of chores:
    your clear light dims, gets dressed - drops its leaves -
    and becomes a naked hand again.




    Pablo Neruda: Love: Ten Poems (1995)


  3. Morning (Love Sonnet XXVII)

  4. - trans. W. S. Merwin (1995)

    Naked you are simple as one of your hands;
    Smooth, earthy, small, transparent, round.
    You've moon-lines, apple pathways
    Naked you are slender as a naked grain of wheat.
    
    Naked you are blue as a night in Cuba;
    You've vines and stars in your hair.
    Naked you are spacious and yellow
    As summer in a golden church.
    
    Naked you are tiny as one of your nails;
    Curved, subtle, rosy, till the day is born
    And you withdraw to the underground world.
    
    As if down a long tunnel of clothing and of chores;
    Your clear light dims, gets dressed, drops its leaves,
    And becomes a naked hand again.




    Pablo Neruda: Selected Poems in Translation. Trans. A. S. Kline (2001)


  5. 'Unclothed, you are true, like one of your hands'

  6. - trans. A. S. Kline (2001)

    Unclothed, you are true, like one of your hands,
    lissome, terrestrial, slight, complete, translucent,
    with curves of moon, and paths of apple-wood:
    Unclothed you are as slender as a nude ear of corn.
    
    Undressed you are blue as Cuban nights,
    with tendrils and stars in your hair,
    undressed you are wide and amber,
    like summer in its chapel of gold.
    
    Naked you are tiny as one of your fingertips,
    shaped, subtle, reddening till light is born,
    and you leave for the subterranean worlds,
    
    as if down a deep tunnel of clothes and chores:
    your brightness quells itself, quenches itself, strips itself down
    turning, again, to being a naked hand.




    Ilan Stavans, ed.: The Poetry of Pablo Neruda (2003)


  7. Sonnet XXVII

  8. - trans. Mark Eisner (2003)

    Naked, you are as simple as one of your hands,
    smooth, earthen, minimal, round, transparent,
    you have moon lines, apple paths,
    naked, you are slender as naked wheat.
    
    Naked you are blue as the night in Cuba,
    you have vines and stars in your hair,
    naked you are as enormous and yellow
    as summer in a church of gold.
    
    Naked you are as small as one of your nails,
    curved, subtle, rose until day is born
    and you withdraw into the world's subterrane
    
    as if in a long tunnel of clothes and chores;
    your clarity flickers out, dresses, looses its leaves -
    and once more returns to being a naked hand.




    Paul Weinfeld (2018)


  9. Sonnet 27 (from Cien Sonetos de Amor)

  10. - trans. Paul Weinfeld (2014)

    Naked, you are simple, like one of your hands,
    smooth, humble, earthly, transparent, and full,
    with curves of the moon, and pathways of apple,
    naked, you are slender as a husked grain.
    
    Naked, you are blue as the nighttime in Cuba,
    with vines and starlight trellised in your hair,
    Naked, you are spacious and amber-colored,
    like summer inside a chapel of gold.
    
    Naked, you are tiny as one of your nails,
    curved and fine, rubescent as the sunrise
    when you withdraw again to your underground world
    
    as though through a tunnel of clothes and errands:
    your clear light dims, gets dressed, drops its leaves,
    and you turn, once again, into a naked hand.




    Jack Ross: Chantal's Book (2002)


  11. Love Sonnet XXVII

  12. - trans. Jack Ross (2026)

    Nude you’re as simple as one of your hands
    earthy    smooth    straight    translucent    round
    you have moon-lines    apple-paths
    nude you’re slim as stripped wheat
    
    nude you’re as blue as the night in Cuba
    vines and stars in your hair
    nude you’re yellow and vast
    like summer in a gold church
    
    nude you’re cute like your fingernail
    curved    subtle    rose    till day breaks
    and you re-enter our underworld
    
    that cul-de-sac of clothes and chores
    your clarity fades    doffs its petals    gets dressed
    turns into a bare hand again
    




    Google Translate (2026)


  13. Soneto XXVII

  14. - trans. Google (2026)

    Naked you are as simple as one of your hands,
    smooth, earthy, minimal, round, transparent,
    you have lines of moonlight, paths of apple blossom,
    naked you are slender as bare wheat.
    
    Naked you are blue as the night in Cuba,
    you have vines and stars in your hair,
    naked you are vast and yellow
    like summer in a golden church.
    
    Naked you are small as one of your fingernails,
    curved, subtle, pink until day breaks
    and you enter the underground of the world
    
    as into a long tunnel of suits and labors:
    your clarity fades, dresses itself, sheds its petals
    and once again becomes a naked hand.
    




Michael Radford, dir. Il Postino [The Postman] (1994)


So, naked or nude? Most of our translators opted for the former when searching for an equivalent for Neruda's "desnuda" - which actually looks more like the English word "denuded" than either of them. That would be more of a visual pun than a valid shift in emphasis, though, I suspect.

Here's a breakdown of the various versions of Neruda's epically "simple" first line: "Desnuda eres tan simple como una de tus manos":
Stephen Tapscott:
Naked, you are simple as one of your hands
W. S. Merwin:
Naked you are simple as one of your hands
A. S. Kline:
Unclothed, you are true, like one of your hands
Mark Eisner:
Naked, you are as simple as one of your hands
Paul Weinfeld:
Naked, you are simple, like one of your hands
Jack Ross:
Nude you’re as simple as one of your hands
Google Translate:
Naked you are as simple as one of your hands

I count five "nakeds" against one "nude" - not to mention an "unclothed". A. S. Kline tries to introduce some variation into Neruda's pattern of direct repetitions by switching from "unclothed" to "undressed", and only then retreat to "naked".

W. H. Auden's "Reflections in A Forest" complains that human beings, unlike most other creatures:
Look naked in the buff, not nude.
We are, indeed, strange ungainly bipeds, with weird bits sticking out everywhere, even when posed by a master portraitist or photographer. The power of Neruda's poem comes from pointing out that context is everything: that the mysterious world of sensuality we associated with nudity - as opposed to simple nakedness - is not an automatic thing, to be taken for granted, but a kind of enchantment which needs to be renewed each time lovers encounter each other.

Do our various translators convey that? Stephen Tapscott's seems competent and good to me; W. S. Merwin supplies a slight polish here and there but is otherwise content with most of the former's choices. A. S. Kline's is a bit clumsy, I think. If his goal is literalism, I don't see the logic of some of his changes to Neruda's deliberately repetitive diction.

Mark Eisner and Paul Weinfeld are both faced with the dilemma of supplying enough divergent word choices to justify a new version: hence Eisner's "subterrane" and Weinfeld's "rubescent" for (respectively) subterráneo [underground] and rosada [rosy]. Eisner's version seems also to have been used to "train" the Google translate version of the poem. It follows him closely, albeit with far less subtle word choices.

Jack Ross's eccentricity of avoiding conventional punctuation stops in his poems, which has grown more marked in him over the years, explains - though it scarcely justifies - his rather affected spacing. Otherwise, he attempts a contrast between "nude" and "bare" in his final line which is not in Neruda or any of the other versions.

It's a poem ideal for film treatment, I think: short and straightforward enough to be quoted in full, but still with subtleties below the surface. The only comparable scene I can remember is in the feuding-sisters rom-com In Her Shoes, where Cameron Diaz is asked to analyse Elizabeth Bishop's "One Art" by a kindly old resthome resident she's being paid to read to.

Bishop's poem is a (fairly) strict-form villanelle, whereas Neruda's is an unrhymed (but metrical) sonnet. In both cases, the restrictions of the form make them particularly susceptible to evocative use in a dramatic context.


Curtis Hanson, dir. In Her Shoes (2005)


Emily Wilson's 2017 translation of Homer's Odyssey - endlessly trumpeted as the first complete version in English by a woman, as if that were its only recommendation - begins with the interesting phrase: "Tell me about a complicated man."

One can understand her frustration in reporting this as "the one translation choice I have been asked about a gazillion times, as if it were the only translation choice I’ve ever had to make ..." Clearly it struck a nerve among readers, though.

Pablo Neruda, like Odysseus, was a "complicated man." Wilson questions just why Homer chose this "relatively unusual epithet, 'much-turny' (polytropos / πολύτροπο[ν])" amongst all the others used elsewhere in the poem.
He is a man of "many stratagems" (polymechanos), "much wiliness" (polymetis), "much-enduring" (polytlas), "much-smarts" (polyphron). He's also "city-sacker" (ptoliporthos) ... "resplendent/ glorious" (dios), "related to Zeus" (diogenes), "godlike" (theoeides, theoeikelos) and "son of Laertes" ...
After all:
Polytropos isn't necessarily positive, at least in later uses. Plutarch applies it to the notorious turn-coat, Alcibiades ... Plato's discussion ... contrasts the "very simple and very truthful" Achilles (ἁπλούστατος καὶ ἀληθέστατος) with Odysseus as πολύτροπος.

Emily Wilson, trans. The Odyssey of Homer (2017)


Again, this "twisty-turny" quality is a characteristic Neruda shared with Odysseus. His very name, after all, was a pseudonym:
[Neftalí Reyes] is thought to have derived his pen name from the Czech poet Jan Neruda, though other sources say the true inspiration was Moravian violinist Wilma Neruda, whose name appears in Arthur Conan Doyle's novel A Study in Scarlet.
Why precisely he should have decided to name himself after a dead Eastern European violin virtuoso is a little difficult to fathom, but proponents of the theory argue that her status as a child prodigy, plus the laudatory remarks made about her technique by the great Sherlock Holmes may have suggested it. They also claim that he didn't read Jan Neruda's work until after the choice of names had been made, which makes it less likely to have prompted it.
Arguably, the epithet anticipates the ways Odysseus will appear in many disguises, will tell numerous false autobiographies, and will succeed in code-switching, transforming himself to fit in with numerous entirely different social worlds and environments. He can be and act as many people, or nobody.
Sound familiar? To quote Auden again:
In legend all were simple,
And held the straitened spot;
But we in legend not,
Are not simple.
Neruda remains an enigma, a slippery, ethically dubious man in both his private and his public lives. But also, at the same time, a zealot and an idealist, a passionate defender of the causes he believed to be just.

He sticks in your throat at times, admittedly, but it's hard not to empathise with the person who wrote: "Sucede que me canso de ser hombre" [Sometimes I'm just tired of being a man] ...






Pablo Neruda [Ricardo Reyes] (1920s)

Ricardo Eliécer Neftalí Reyes Basoalto
[Pablo Neruda]

(1904-1973)

Books I own are marked in bold:
    Poetry:

  1. Crepusculario (1921)
    • Book of Twilight. Trans. William O'Daly (2018)
  2. Veinte poemas de amor y una canción desesperada (1924)
    • Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair. [‘20 Poemas de amor y una Canción desesperada’, 1924]. Trans. W. S. Merwin. 1969. Cape Editions. London: Jonathan Cape, 1971.
    • Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair (bilingual edition). Trans. William O'Daly (1976)
  3. Tentativa del hombre infinito (1926)
    • Venture of the Infinite Man. Trans. Jessica Powell. Introduction by Mark Eisner (2017)
  4. El hondero entusiasta (1933)
  5. Residencia en la tierra (1925–1931) (1935)
    • Included in: Residencia en la tierra. 1933, 1935. Ed. Hernán Loyola. Letras Hispanicas, 254. Madrid: Ediciones Cátedra, 1987.
    • Included in: Residence on Earth. [‘Residencia en la tierra’: I, 1933; II, 1935; III, 1947]. Trans. Donald D. Walsh. New York: New Directions Press, 1973.
  6. España en el corazón. Himno a las glorias del pueblo en la guerra: (1936–1937) (1937)
  7. Nuevo canto de amor a Stalingrado (1943)
  8. Tercera residencia (1935–1945) (1947)
    • Included in: Residencia en la tierra. 1933, 1935. Ed. Hernán Loyola. Letras Hispanicas, 254. Madrid: Ediciones Cátedra, 1987.
    • Included in: Residence on Earth. [‘Residencia en la tierra’: I, 1933; II, 1935; III, 1947]. Trans. Donald D. Walsh. New York: New Directions Press, 1973.
  9. Alturas de Macchu Picchu (1948)
    • The Heights of Macchu Picchu (bilingual edition). Trans. Nathaniel Tarn. Preface by Robert Pring-Mill (1966)
  10. Canto general (1950)
    • Canto General. 1950. Biblioteca de Bolsillo. Barcelona; Editorial Seix-Barral, 1983.
    • Let the Rail Splitter Awake and Other Poems. 1947. Trans. 1950. Introduction by Christopher Perriam. Illustrated by José Venturelli. London: The Journeyman Press Ltd., 1988.
    • Canto General: Fiftieth Anniversary Edition. [‘Canto General’, 1950]. Trans. Jack Schmitt. Introduction by Roberto González Echevarría. Latin American Literature and culture, 7. 1991. A Centennial Book. Berkeley & Los Angeles: University of California Press, 2000.
  11. Los versos del capitán (1952)
    • The Captain's Verses (bilingual edition). Trans. Donald D. Walsh (1972)
  12. Todo el amor (1953)
  13. Las uvas y el viento (1954)
    • Grapes and the Wind. Trans. Michael Straus (2019)
  14. Odas elementales (1954)
  15. Nuevas odas elementales (1955)
  16. Tercer libro de las odas (1957)
  17. Estravagario (1958)
    • Extravagaria: A Bilingual Edition. 1958. Trans. Alastair Reid. Cape Poetry Paperbacks. London: Jonathan Cape, 1972.
  18. Navegaciones y regresos (1959)
  19. Oda al Gato (1959)
  20. Cien sonetos de amor (1959)
    • 100 Love Sonnets. [‘Cien sonetos de amor’, 1960]. Trans. Stephen Tapscott. Texas Pan American Series. 1986. Austin: University of Texas Press, 1995.
    • 100 Love Sonnets (bilingual edition). Trans. with an Afterword by Gustavo Escobedo. Introduction by Rosemary Sullivan; Reflections on reading Neruda by George Elliott Clarke, Beatriz Hausner and A. F. Moritz (2004)
  21. Canción de gesta (1960)
  22. Poesías: Las piedras de Chile (1960)
  23. Cantos ceremoniales (1961)
  24. Plenos Poderes (1962)
    • Fully Empowered: A Bilingual Edition. [‘Plenos poderes’, 1962]. Trans. Alastair Reid. A Condor Book. London: Souvenir Press, 1976.
  25. Memorial de Isla Negra. 5 vols (1964)
    • Isla Negra: A Notebook. A Bilingual Edition. [‘Memorial de Isla Negra’, 1964]. Afterword by Enrico Mario Santí. Trans. Alastair Reid. 1981. A Condor Book. London: Souvenir Press, 1982.
  26. Diez Odas para diez grabados de Roser Bru (1965)
  27. Arte de pájaros (1966)
  28. Fulgor y muerte de Joaquín Murieta [libreto para una ópera de Sergio Ortega] (1967)
    • Splendor and Death of Joaquín Murieta. [‘Fulgor y Muerte de Joaquín Murieta’, 1966]. Trans. Ben Belitt. 1972. Noonday Press. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 1973.
  29. La Barcarola (1967)
  30. Las manos del día (1968)
    • The Hands of the Day. Trans. William O'Daly (2008)
  31. Fin del mundo. Illustrated by Mario Carreño, Nemesio Antúnez, Pedro Millar, María Martner, Julio Escámez & Oswaldo Guayasamín (1969)
  32. Aún (1969)
    • Still Another Day. Trans. William O'Daly (1984)
  33. Maremoto. With colour woodcuts by Carin Oldfelt Hjertonsson (1970)
  34. La espada encendida (1970)
  35. Las piedras del cielo (1970)
    • Stones of the Sky. Trans. William O'Daly (1990)
  36. Discurso de Estocolmo (1972)
  37. Geografía infructuosa (1972)
  38. Incitación al Nixonicidio y alabanza de la revolución chilena (1973)
  39. El mar y las campanas (1973)
    • The Sea and the Bells. Trans. William O'Daly (1988)
  40. La rosa separada. With engravings by Enrique Zañartu (1973)
    • The Separate Rose. Trans. William O'Daly (1985)
  41. Jardín de invierno (1974)
    • Winter Garden. Trans. James Nolan (1987)
  42. El corazón amarillo (1974)
    • The Yellow Heart. Trans. William O'Daly (1990)
  43. 2000 (1974)
  44. El libro de las preguntas (1974)
    • The Book of Questions. [‘El libro de las preguntas’, 1974]. Trans. William O'Daly. 1991. A Kage-An Book. Port Townsend, Washington: Copper Canyon Press, 2001.
  45. Elegía (1974)
  46. Defectos escogidos (1974)
  47. A Basic Anthology. Ed. Robert Pring-Mill (1975)
    • A Basic Anthology. Ed. Robert Pring-Mill. Dolphin Books. Oxford: The Dolphin Book Co. Ltd., 1975.

  48. Prose:

  49. [with Tomás Lago] Anillos (1926)
  50. El habitante y su esperanza. Novela (1926)
  51. [with Miguel Ángel Asturias] Comiendo en Hungría (1969)
  52. Hacia la Ciudad Espléndida [Nobel Lecture] (1972)
    • Hacia la Ciudad Espléndida / Toward the Splendid City: Nobel Lecture. 1972. New York: Farrar, Straus & Giroux, 1974.
  53. Confieso que he vivido: Memorias (1974)
    • Memoirs. [‘Confieso que he vivido: Memorias’, 1974]. Trans. Hardie St. Martin. 1977. Harmondsworth: Penguin, 1981.
    • The Complete Memoirs: Expanded Edition. 2017. Trans. Hardie St. Martin & Adrian Nathan West. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2021.
  54. Para nacer he nacido. Ed. Matilde Neruda & Miguel Otero Silva (1978)
    • Passions and Impressions. [‘Para nacer he nacido’, 1978]. Ed. Matilde Neruda & Miguel Otero Silva. Trans. Margaret Sayers Peden. New York: Farrar, Straus & Giroux, Inc., 1983.

  55. Translations:

  56. Selected Poems of Pablo Neruda. Ed. & trans. Ben Belitt. (1961)
    • Selected Poems of Pablo Neruda. Ed. & trans. Ben Belitt. Introduction by Luis Monguió. 1961. An Evergreen Book. New York: Grove Press, Inc., 1963.
  57. Selected Poems: A Bilingual Edition. Trans. Nathaniel Tarn (1970)
    • Selected Poems: A Bi-lingual Edition. Ed. Nathaniel Tarn. Trans. Anthony Kerrigan, W. S. Merwin, Alastair Reid, & Nathaniel Tarn. 1970. Introduction by Jean Franco. Penguin Poets. Harmondsworth: Penguin, 1975.
  58. New Poems (1968-1970) (bilingual edition). Trans. Ben Belitt (1972)
  59. Selected Odes of Pablo Neruda. Trans. Margaret Sayers Peden (1990)
  60. Late and Posthumous Poems, 1968-1974. Trans. Ben Belitt. Introduction by Manuel Durán (1994)
  61. Love: Poems. Ed. Francesca Gonshaw (1995)
    • Love: Poems. Ed. Francesca Gonshaw. Trans. Stephen Tapscott, W. S. Merwin, Alastair Reid, Nathaniel Tarn, Ken Krabbenhoft, and Donald D. Walsh. London: The Harvill Press, 1995.
  62. The Poetry of Pablo Neruda [Anthology of 600 of Neruda's poems, some with Spanish originals, drawing on the work of 36 translators]. Ed. Ilan Stavans. (2003)
    • The Poetry of Pablo Neruda. Ed. Ilan Stavans. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2003.
  63. On the Blue Shore of Silence: Poems of the Sea. Trans. Alastair Reid. Epilogue by Antonio Skármeta (2004)
  64. The Essential Neruda: Selected Poems. Trans. Robert Hass, Jack Hirschman, Mark Eisner, Forrest Gander, Stephen Mitchell, Stephen Kessler, & John Felstiner. Preface by Lawrence Ferlinghetti (2004)
  65. Intimacies: Poems of Love. Trans. Alastair Reid (2008)
  66. All The Odes. Trans. Margaret Sayers Peden et al. (2013)
  67. Then Come Back: The Lost Neruda. Trans. Forrest Gander (2016)

  68. Secondary:

  69. Eisner, Mark. Neruda: The Biography of a Poet. 2018. Ecco. New York: HarperCollins Publishers, 2019.
  70. Ampuero, Roberto. The Neruda Case. ['El caso Neruda', 2008]. Trans. Carolina De Robertis. Riverhead Books. New York & London: Penguin, 2012.
  71. Skármeta, Antonio. Burning Patience. 1985. Trans. Katherine Silver. 1987. A Minerva Paperback. London: Methuen / Mandarin, 1989.


Mark Eisner: Neruda: The Biography of a Poet (2018)





William Roberts: The Vorticists at the Restaurant de la Tour Eiffel (1961-62)

Modern Poets in English

  1. C. P. Cavafy (1863-1933)
  2. Anna Akhmatova (1889-1966)
  3. Osip Mandelstam (1891-1938)
  4. Arthur Rimbaud (1854-1891)
  5. Guillaume Apollinaire (1880-1918)
  6. Rainer Maria Rilke (1875-1926)
  7. Paul Celan (1920-1970)
  8. Eugenio Montale (1896-1981)
  9. Salvatore Quasimodo (1901-1968)
  10. Federico García Lorca (1898-1936)
  11. Pablo Neruda (1904-1973)
  12. Fernando Pessoa (1888-1935)